"I kissed a girl, and 10 yards away a Buick exploded."
Talk about enticing!
Who cares what the article is about, or even who wrote it ... just tell me what the hell happens next!
Enticing is EXACTLY you what you want in a query letter, and in the first pages of a novel.
But if you, like me, do want to know what happens next, here's Phillip dePoy's essay on Theatre in Atlanta.