I don't care what the theme of your work is. I care what the story is.
2. I love to write
I don't care. I only care about whether you can write well enough to tell a good compelling story.
3. I think my book will make a great movie.
I don't care. I only care whether it will make a good book.
4. It took me x+1 years to write.
I don't care. I only care if it's a good story.
5. Global marketing potential.
What this says to me in screaming bold red letters is:
Even if you have a great novel, the idea of dealing with someone who would write it down, and might actually believe it to be true and not understand how ludicrous and pretentious it sounds, is enough to make me stop reading and say no.
6. I am aware of your background.
I'm hoping you don't mean this to sound as creepy as it does.