I've been marking up some memoir queries for an upcoming podcast (details to come) and almost every single query stumbled at the start.
The only way to get better is to practice, so let's.
Post the first sentence of your query letter in the comments column.
I'll take a look and make some comments about what worked, what didn't and hopefully some cogent reasons on why.
I'm not going to do a zillion of these;
Comments are now closed.
To see my take on the first lines, go here