Let's find out.
Post your first paragraph in the comment section below. Six sentences,70 words are general guidelines.
I"m going to cut off entries pretty early so don't dawdle.
Then I'm going to post the entries and make pointed comments.
If you don't want pointed comments, DO NOT POST.
This is not the QueryBunny!
Well, fire away, but probably better to post first and ask questions later.
8:13 update: comments closed for now. I'll take a look and see if we can reopen but 20+ seems like a lot to assess.
More soon. And will be posted here.
Post is up now.
I'm working my way through this a couple entries at a time as I take a break from tormenting clients with Brilliant Ideas for World Domination.