Thursday, December 15, 2011

Gotcha knickers twisted, yo?

The most devilish contest idea EVAH comes from blog reader Shaunna  (visit her blog here to see what other kind of mischief she's conjuring up.)

Here's the concept: write a poem, or a story in a poem, that's reversible. That means the lines form a poem reading down AND up.

Here's an example from the instigator of this madness herself:


Reading down:
For love,
how you look
is
what matters most.
Let's be honest.
You can smile
or
grimace,
flirt or
frown.
It makes no difference.
You might believe
love
welcomes
an open heart.
But the end
of the story
can be told
much
sooner.
Look
at the face:
beauty
has a chance at
everything.



Reading up:
Everything
has a chance at 
beauty.
At the face,
look
sooner.
Much
can be told
of the story
but the end.
An open heart
welcomes
love.
You might believe
it makes no difference:
frown,
flirt, or
grimace.
Or
you can smile.
Let's be honest.
What matters most
is
how you look
for love.



Another example is the title of this post:

Gotcha knickers twisted, yo?
Yo! Twisted knickers gotcha?

(notice that punctuation will help you a lot!)


And just to make things LOTS of fun, it's fewer maximum words this time: 60.

(That evil cackle you hear is me)

Contest opens Friday 12/16 at Noon and runs through Sunday  12/18 at noon. (I figure you might need some extra time for this one!)

60 words max (fewer is fine) arranged in lines that form a poem reading both up and down.

Only one word prompt this time: candy (aren't you glad it wasn't knickers? or twisted?!)

Post your entry in the comment column on this post.
Your entry should have two parts:, once for how it reads down and once for how it reads up. 

If you need a mulligan, delete your entry and post again.

Questions? Best way to get answers is to send me a tweet @janet_reid



Ready?
Set?
Write!

Too late! Contest closed at noon on Sunday! Now, to the most fun of all--reading the entries!



53 comments:

  1. Brittle and broken,
    You hide, soft
    underneath your hard candy shell
    Listen. You’re next.
    Don’t criticize, because
    Most people do
    criticize…themselves

    Criticize themselves
    Most people do.
    Don’t criticize, because
    listen—you’re next.
    Underneath your hard candy shell
    You hide--soft,
    brittle and broken

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  2. Wow. That's incredible! I love both those poems but have no idea if I could do it. Definitely a challenge, and unforunately, I don't have the time to tackle it right now.

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  4. I must do something
    with my selfish life.
    Redemption works best.
    Give back candy stolen.
    Repair damage caused.
    Ease the pain inflicted.
    A life lived selfishly—
    it’s not worth it.



    It’s not worth it—
    a life lived selfishly.
    Ease the pain inflicted.
    Repair damage caused.
    Give back candy stolen.
    Redemption works best
    with my selfish life.
    I must do something.

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  5. For a moment
    It frees you,
    Curiosity.
    What’s behind the door?
    You can know
    If you look.
    It could be a dream, like candy to your sleep.
    It could be a nightmare; the things that make you weep.
    The choice is yours.
    You can’t close what you’ve opened
    I know.
    See, on this side of the door,
    I’m already haunted.


    I’m already haunted.
    See, on this side of the door
    I know
    You can’t close what you’ve opened.
    The choice is yours.
    It could be a nightmare; the things that make you weep
    It could be a dream; like candy to your sleep.
    If you look,
    You can know
    What’s behind the door.
    Curiosity.
    It frees you,
    For a moment.

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  6. Sweet candy swirls
    Around and around,
    Flowing ‘round the pole.
    Still gleaming and sticky.
    Weeping
    Sugar candy. The
    Scent of
    Candy is so easily blown away. The
    Fragile confection
    Is
    A child’s bright dream
    Spun all-too-fine.
    Who watches candy twirl?
    Candy is too delicate
    To endure
    Such hard scrutiny.
    Watching shatters this sweet fantasy.
    Wait for candy to finish.


    “Wait for Candy to finish.”
    Watching shatters this sweet fantasy.
    Such hard scrutiny
    To endure -
    Candy is too delicate.
    Who watches Candy twirl,
    Spun all-too-fine?
    A child’s bright dream
    Is
    Fragile, confection:
    Candy is so easily blown away. The
    Scent of
    Sugar-Candy. The
    Weeping.
    Still... gleaming and sticky
    Flowing ‘round the pole
    Around and around
    Sweet Candy swirls.

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  7. Down:
    That’s so dysfunctional,

    But I’m still holding on

    To candy

    Crumbling

    Like the chalk

    That I used when tracing my dreams

    On napkins under your shot glass.

    You keep your answers.

    It’s all lackluster now.

    But in the condensation of your latest drink

    There are sparkles.

    I must get out alive:

    This is functional thinking



    Up:

    This is functional thinking:

    I must get out alive.

    There are sparkles

    But in the condensation of your latest drink

    It’s all lackluster now.

    You keep your answers

    On napkins under your shot glass

    That I used when tracing my dreams

    Like the chalk

    Crumbling

    To candy.

    But I’m still holding on.

    That’s so dysfunctional.


    (PS. I should never write things while my mother is reading excerpts from her codependancy therapy books. It does stuff like this to my brain.)

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  8. Here's my entry. It's called Desire.

    There are too many words on my tongue
    as your mouth shivers against mine –
    love is sticky here,
    pleasures eaten like candy,
    fingers searching for another taste.

    You are my perfect indulgence,
    my best desire,
    passion on its knees –
    do not hesitate,
    do not wait –
    give me my sin, again.
    -----------------------------
    Give me my sin again –
    do not wait,
    do not hesitate.
    Passion on its knees,
    my best desire:
    you are my perfect indulgence.

    Fingers searching for another taste,
    pleasures eaten like candy,
    love is sticky, here
    as your mouth shivers again mine –
    there are too many words on my tongue.

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  9. Meh, not my best work and it's over 60 words, but what the hell, it was still fun.


    Forward:
    To raise him up right
    You get just one chance
    A promise, but finite
    From sweet boy to fine man

    At the moment he's born
    You look down in your arms
    As night brightens to morn
    Besotted by his charms

    You hope but you fear
    Are you up to this job?
    A new life is here
    His name will be Rob


    Back:
    His name will be Rob
    A new life is here
    Are you up to this job?
    You hope but you fear

    Besotted by his charms
    As night brightens to morn
    You look down in your arms
    At the moment he's born

    From sweet boy to fine man
    A promise though finite
    You get just one chance
    To raise him up right

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  11. I give up
    Backwards and forwards?
    60 words or less
    Seriously?
    What do you expect?
    A masterpiece?
    I think not
    And then candy?
    Rhetorical questions, perhaps
    This must be
    Some kind of a bad joke

    Some kind of a bad joke
    This must be
    Rhetorical questions, perhaps
    And then candy?
    I think not
    A masterpiece?
    What do you expect?
    Seriously?
    60 words or less
    Backwards and forwards?
    I give up

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  13. If I could
    keep you little forever,
    I would,
    my darling child.
    Sticky fingers,
    goofy grins,
    candy-
    like
    kisses.
    Little hands
    holding
    mine.
    You are
    here with me,
    for now.

    For now,
    here with me,
    you are
    mine.
    Holding
    little hands,
    kisses
    like
    candy,
    goofy grins,
    sticky fingers.
    My darling child,
    I would
    keep you little forever
    if I could.

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  14. Down

    Hobo Tom bums
    a ride,
    a smoke,
    a buck,
    some gum.

    Hobo Tom runs
    the streets,
    the mall,
    game on
    Candy.

    Hobo Tom sells
    bottles,
    booze,
    rolls, and
    rock.

    Me and
    Hobo Tom.

    Up

    Hobo Tom,
    me, and
    Rock.

    Rolls and
    booze?
    Bottles?

    Hobo Tom sells
    Candy.
    Game on.

    The mall,
    the streets,
    Hobo Tom runs.

    Some gum?
    A buck.
    A smoke?
    A ride.
    Hobo Tom?
    Bums.

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  15. Bittersweet

    How you haunt me in the morning...
    When I realize
    dreams
    melted
    like
    hot candy—
    sweet, sticky, bitter, nasty—
    and it doesn't even matter.
    Nothing's real anyway.
    I might as well stay here
    inside this bittersweet, melted candy dream with you.
    It's all a journey from nothing into nothing.
    I'll rest here.
    My wings are too tattered to go on.


    Bittersweet (the remix)

    My wings are too tattered to go on.
    I'll rest here.
    It's all a journey from nothing into nothing
    inside this bittersweet, melted candy dream with you.
    I might as well stay here.
    Nothing's real anyway,
    And it doesn't even matter.
    Sweet, sticky, bitter, nasty
    hot candy—
    like
    melted
    dreams
    when I realize
    how you haunt me in the morning.

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  16. Candy!
    I can eat many sweet treats
    sticky, hard, soft, chewy,
    nuts,
    nougat,
    caramel.
    I get woozy.

    Chocolate!
    It is good,
    package, box, or dish.
    Strawberry, raspberry
    fillings gooey.
    Yummy, yummy,
    good says tummy.

    Quick Snacks!
    M & M's
    Jelly beans
    Snickers
    Mars
    Bars.
    These are my favorite things....

    Things favorite are these...
    Bars
    Mars
    Snickers
    Beans Jelly
    M's & M.
    Snacks Quick!

    Tummy says good,
    yummy, yummy.
    Gooey fillings
    raspberry,
    strawberry.
    Dish or box, package,
    good is it.
    Chocolate!

    Woozy I get.
    Caramel,
    nougat,
    nuts.
    Chewy, soft, hard, sticky,
    treats sweet
    many eat can I.
    Candy!

    Okay, so the second last sentence is iffy, but heck, I had fun! And now I want candy!

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  18. Reading down:

    The lid creaks
    on rusted hinges.
    I lay
    in the dark.
    With squinted eyes,
    I bid aloha
    to the sun.
    Six feet down,
    the air is cold.
    Above,
    you stand.
    Your voice
    not
    a stranger to my ears. The sound
    from
    your lips like candy
    to my soul. Drawn to
    not
    feel
    fear. For you, I
    tremble in
    love.

    Reading up:

    Love -
    tremble in
    fear. For you, I
    feel
    not.
    To my soul, drawn to
    your lips like candy
    from
    a stranger. To my ears, the sound -
    not
    your voice.
    You stand
    above,
    The air is cold
    six feet down.
    To the sun,
    I bid aloha
    with squinted eyes.
    In the dark,
    I lay
    on rusted hinges.
    The lid creaks.

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  19. Reading Down:

    Betrayal,
    Blistering, biting, choking,
    Fill Hearts.

    Words sweet as candy
    But reveal nothing
    As her eyes say all.

    She is angel and demon
    Fight for
    Sword and Champion!
    The dawn breaks:
    As she draws breath,
    The Earth Stills.

    He will know
    Her love, like blood
    Renews and Imprisons
    Courage most fair:
    Time makes myths of us all.

    Reading Up:

    Time makes myths of us all.
    Courage most fair
    Renews and imprisons.
    Her love, like blood.
    He will know:

    The Earth stills
    As she draws breath.
    The dawn breaks.
    Sword and Champion
    Fight! For
    She is angel (and demon)

    As her eyes say all...
    But reveal nothing.
    Words sweet as candy

    Fill hearts.
    Blistering, biting, choking
    Betrayal.

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  21. "Gentleness?
    Love?" he said.
    "Kindness?
    What are these things?"
    He'd placed wilted petals
    in my palm.
    "Flowers,"
    he'd said.
    "Beauty.
    You will find
    trust."
    Dare I
    believe him?
    Should I?
    Candy-sweet
    words--emptiness.
    Vacant,
    smoldering smiles.
    It started and ended with
    lies.

    Lies?
    It started and ended with
    smoldering smiles.
    Vacant
    words. Emptiness,
    candy-sweet.
    Should I
    believe him,
    dare I
    trust,
    "You will find
    beauty,"
    he'd said.
    "Flowers."
    In my palm,
    he'd placed wilted petals.
    What are these things?
    "Kindness.
    Love," he said.
    Gentleness.

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  22. UP

    How did this happen
    Feeling for my bet friend
    I tell him everything
    He's seen me laugh, cry and fart
    now I want him like a kid wants candy
    I can't imagine things ever being normal
    one look, one silly grin
    I know I'll blush and give my secret crush away

    DOWN

    I know I'll blush and give my secret crush away
    one look, one silly grin
    I can't imagine things ever being normal
    Now I want him like a kid wants candy
    he's seen me laugh, cry and fart
    I tell him everything
    Feelings for my best friend
    How did this happen

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  25. Homage to Dorothy Parker

    Chocolate is love,
    smooth and delicious,
    but
    Liquor is seduction,
    dark and malicious.

    Dark and malicious,
    liquor is seduction,
    but
    smooth and delicious,
    Chocolate is love.

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  26. Her Name was Candy

    You realized
    How alone you were,
    Passing by
    All the pretty girls
    And another one--
    You lifted your glass to her.
    To make a real connection,
    You took a chance.
    She liked you and
    Her name was Candy.

    . . .

    Her name was Candy.
    She liked you and
    You took a chance
    To make a real connection.
    You lifted your glass to her,
    And another one.
    All the pretty girls
    Passing by . . .
    How alone you were,
    You realized.

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  27. "No," said mother.
    "Although mountain candy rocks big time,
    Climb high then crash,
    Regret will you drink."

    Adult version:

    Drink, you will regret.
    Crash then high.
    Climb time Big Rocks Candy mountain
    Although mother said no.

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  28. Broken heart lost,
    After mending,
    I was wandering,
    Found kisses with love’s candy.

    Candy loves with kisses, Found.
    Wandering was I,
    Mending after,
    Lost heart broken.

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  29. I Want Candy! A Palindromic Ode.

    Top to Bottom, Left to Right

    Desserts I stressed
    Mom . . .
    Won tons? Not now
    Mom . . .
    No lemons no melon
    Mom . . .
    Now I won

    Bottom to Top, Right to Left

    Now I won
    . . . Mom
    No lemons no melon
    . . . Mom
    Won tons? Not now
    . . . Mom
    Desserts I stressed

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  30. SWEET LOVER

    Sweet.
    Echo of silence. My
    hit.
    My fix. Anticipating what’s to
    come.
    Burning for you to
    be.
    Skin stroking skin, and I’ll
    breathe.
    Together vital, together
    more.
    I keep wanting...
    I keep pushing...
    I keep screaming...
    And yet–
    Rapt with guilt. Wretched.
    Unrest.
    Soft you’ll break on my tongue again.
    Candy.
    Sweet reason why all reason flees me.


    LOVER SWEET

    Sweet reason why all reason flees me.
    Candy.
    Soft you’ll break on my tongue again.
    Unrest.
    Rapt with guilt. Wretched.
    And yet–
    I keep screaming...
    I keep pushing...
    I keep wanting...
    more.
    Together vital, together
    breathe.
    Skin stroking skin, and I’ll
    be.
    Burning for you to
    come.
    My fix. Anticipating what’s to
    hit.
    Echo of silence. My
    Sweet.

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  31. Mystery.
    You were one
    with the way you walked away
    and laughed,
    hands waving
    with over exaggeration.
    I called your name
    to fill my craving
    as a request
    for something sweet.
    You bitch Candy.


    Candy, you bitch.
    For something sweet,
    as a request
    to fill my craving
    I called your name
    with over exaggeration,
    hands waving.
    And laughed.
    With the way you walked away,
    you were one
    mystery.

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  32. Your name is no longer safe in my mouth.
    Treacherous candy I could have done without.
    Sweeter than any lie told in the dark:
    Your song left no room for doubt.


    REVERSED


    Your song left no room for doubt.
    Sweeter than any lie told in the dark:
    Treacherous candy I could have done without.
    Your name is no longer safe in my mouth.

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  33. Can't stop myself,
    Holidays.
    Ever so happy
    on the
    Bathroom scale.
    Do I
    need this candy?
    I don't.
    but
    it's true.
    I will have some more.


    I will have some more.
    it's true
    but
    I don't
    need this candy
    do I,
    Bathroom scale?
    On the
    ever so happy
    Holidays,
    can't stop myself

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  34. This is Just To Say
    Like the icebox plums of Carlos Williams Carlos
    Sweet Books
    Candy of the mind
    I'll have them, I will
    Until I die- afterwards too.
    Everyday, Everywhere
    I'll read
    No matter what



    No matter what
    I'll read
    Everyday, Everywhere
    Until I die- afterwards too
    I'll have them
    Candy of the mind
    Sweet Books
    Like the icebox plums of Carlos Williams Carlos
    This is Just To Say

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  35. Candy,
    relationships are complicated.
    I don't know
    what makes me happy,
    but if you're wondering –
    you're important to me.
    Even though,
    when I wake up,
    I may not want to see you, just
    remember:
    when you're head's lost
    between my legs,
    it's heaven.

     OlOlO

    It's heaven,
    between my legs.
    When you're head's lost
    just remember:
    I may not want to see you
    when I wake up,
    even though
    you're important to me.
    But if you're wondering
    what makes me happy,
    I don't know.
    Relationships are complicated,

    - Candy

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  36. Guilty pleasure.
    One… just taste one. Please?
    Forbidden.
    You have… can’t I?
    But, is that everything?
    I want sugar.
    Sweet and sinful temptation.
    I love honey.
    Candy! Oh!

    * * * * *

    Oh, Candy!
    Honey, I love
    temptation, sinful and sweet.
    Sugar, I want
    everything that is.
    But, I can’t have you.
    Forbidden.
    Please… one taste, just one
    pleasure.
    Guilty.

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  37. His words, like spun peppermint,
    clear the clouds,
    distance no wound.
    Tight sugarcanes twist
    whispers on fast kisses,
    chocolate sweet with evening storms.
    Bitter the weather, black licorice,
    his temper.

    Temper his licorice black,
    weather the bitter storms,
    evening with sweet chocolate kisses.
    Fast on whispers!
    Twist sugarcanes tight-wound.
    No distance
    clouds the clear peppermint,
    spun like words,
    His.

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  38. (Down)

    candies are memories
    sweetness of lands
    Turkey, Jordan, Belgium
    pastel, soft, moldable
    savored then digested

    (Up)
    savored then digested
    pastel, soft, moldable
    Turkey, Jordan, Belgium
    sweetness of lands
    candies are memories

    (Backward Down)
    Memories are candies,
    lands of sweetness
    Belgium, Jordan, Turkey
    moldable, soft, pastel
    digested, then savored

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  39. As nourishment for my soul
    I had reached for you.
    But
    Like a piece of candy,
    A momentary pleasure,
    You melted on my tongue.


    You melted on my tongue
    —a momentary pleasure
    like a piece of candy—
    But
    I had reached for you
    As nourishment for my soul.

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  41. Candy was her name,
    At least the last time.
    When we spoke
    She said she might
    Return again
    Someday,
    Though Candy
    Might not be her name.
    Sweet and colorful,
    A vast number of names
    She has.
    I do not know them all.
    Candy comes to visit me,
    Though I seldom know her name.

    Though I seldom know her name,
    Candy comes to visit me.
    I do not know them all,
    She has
    A vast number of names.
    Sweet and colorful
    Might not be her name,
    Though Candy,
    Someday,
    Return again
    She said she might
    When we spoke.
    At least the last time,
    Candy was her name.

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  42. Hello Christmas.

    Gum drop tears fall into pieces of bittersweet chocolate memories,

    while my candy cane heart twists and breaks.

    Burnt gingerbread men smile,
    melting my foil-wrapped soul.

    Sour lemon-drop envy,
    sticky, sugar-coated despair

    are

    all I have left to devour.

    *****************************

    All I have left to devour

    are

    sticky, sugar-coated despair,
    sour lemon-drop envy.

    Melting my foil-wrapped soul,
    burnt gingerbread men smile.

    While my candy cane heart twists and breaks,

    gum drop tears fall into pieces of bittersweet chocolate memories.

    Hello Christmas.

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  43. Mirrored Psalm Song


    I've seen snowdrifts
    more loyal than some
    I've known. As a gift,
    I'll leave them with one

    piece of candy.

    Your bibles are written
    by and for the muses
    that reside, yet are hidden
    in your heads. (These are your excuses.)




    In your heads, these are your excuses
    that reside, yet are hidden
    by and for the muses.
    Your bibles are written.

    Piece of candy?

    I'll leave them with one
    I've known as a gift
    more loyal than some.
    I've seen snowdrifts.

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  44. In an instant,
    with a glance,
    pulses race.
    Lips meet.
    Together
    on fire,
    burning,
    again,
    again.
    New.
    Different.
    Like a piece of hard candy,
    sticky
    sweet.
    Still
    until the melody fades, but
    pillows cool.
    The bed
    sighs under
    the weight of years.


    The weight of years
    sighs under
    the bed
    pillows. Cool
    until the melody fades, but
    still
    sweet.
    Sticky,
    like a piece of hard candy.
    Different.
    New
    again,
    again
    burning.
    On fire
    together.
    Lips meet.
    Pulses race
    with a glance,
    in an instant.

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  45. TOP TO BOTTOM:

    In the candy shop
    Where children are going wild
    The tastes, the scents, the happiness
    Love of the candy shop
    Peppermint sticks
    Chocolate galore
    Sour and sweet, you just can’t ignore
    Love of the candy shop
    The candy shop, shop!
    What a treat for your sweet tooth!
    At the candy shop, shop!

    BOTTOM TO TOP:

    At the candy shop, shop,
    What a treat for your sweet tooth!
    The candy shop, shop!
    Love of the candy shop..
    Sour and sweet, you just can’t ignore
    Chocolate galore!
    Peppermint sticks
    Love of the candy shop!
    The tastes, the scents, the happiness
    Where children are going wild
    In the candy shop!

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  46. "hard candy
    sucks,"
    the child
    said;
    his father
    disapproving.

    disapproving,
    his father
    said,
    "the child
    sucks
    hard candy!"

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  47. Love is like candy:
    Sweet
    Then
    Sour.

    Alone,
    You stand
    Until another comes.

    Hope lives,
    Leaving forever-marks.

    Time moves.
    Hearts morph.
    Love withers.

    Sweet
    Then
    Sour,
    Love is like candy.

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    Love is like candy:
    Sour
    Then
    Sweet.

    Love withers.
    Hearts morph.

    Time moves,
    Leaving forever-marks.
    Hope lives.

    Until another comes,
    You stand
    Alone.

    Sour
    Then
    Sweet,
    Love is like candy.

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  49. Candy
    Opening wrapper
    Squeeing!
    Could it be?
    Gum drops?
    Popcorn?


    Lollipops?
    Layers of chocolate
    Candy

    Candy Canes
    Sorry no taffy for me.

    Oh yes I can catch the Gingerbread man




    Oh yes I can catch the Gingerbread Man
    Sorry no taffy for me.
    Candy Canes.

    Candy
    Layers of chocolate
    Lollipops?
    Popcorn?
    Gumdrops?
    Could it be?
    Squeeing!
    Opening wrapper
    Candy

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  50. My dog ate
    What was meant for me:
    Hard swirls of peppermint candy.
    Empty wrappers crackle underfoot.
    Rainbow drool
    On white carpet.
    Standing before me,
    Ears down and tail tucked,
    He looks guilty, even remorseful.
    I know he’ll do it again--
    This isn’t his first offense.
    On the plus side,
    His breath smells awesome.



    His breath smells awesome
    (On the plus side).
    This isn’t his first offense--
    I know he’ll do it again.
    He looks guilty, even remorseful,
    Ears down and tail tucked,
    Standing before me.
    On white carpet,
    Rainbow drool.
    Empty wrappers crackle underfoot.
    Hard swirls of peppermint candy:
    What was meant for me,
    My dog ate.

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  51. Every day goes faster
    as I tunnel through my rut.
    Years and minutes fly.

    Like daydreams and candy floss,
    delicate things crumple
    when you touch them.

    Hope was only another dream.
    Now I plod steadily forward,
    but
    I flew towards dreams once.

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    I flew towards dreams once,
    but
    now I plod steadily forward.
    Hope was only another dream.

    When you touch them,
    delicate things crumple
    like daydreams and candy floss.

    Years and minutes fly
    as I tunnel through my rut.
    Every day goes faster.

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  52. Occupy This

    Victory is sweet
    and
    you will win
    in the end,
    but
    it won’t be quick, or easy.

    Pacifism works
    but
    sometimes it hurts.

    Did
    Gandhi
    like
    the beatings?
    Take
    some pride?
    Feel
    justified?

    Is your revolution
    really necessary?
    “What else is?”
    You may ask.

    My father used to say,
    “Liquor is quicker
    though
    candy is dandy.”






















    “Candy is dandy
    though
    liquor is quicker.”
    My father used to say.

    You may ask,
    “What else is
    really necessary?”

    Is your revolution
    justified?

    Feel
    some pride.
    Take
    the beatings
    like
    Gandhi
    did.

    Sometimes it hurts
    but
    pacifism works.

    It won’t be quick, or easy
    but
    in the end
    you will win.
    And
    victory is sweet

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  53. My brain can’t go there,
    in places of confusion,
    in crowds of want.
    What is it?
    Words and phrases of cleverness you desire?
    No it’s brilliance,
    like a star,
    like a promise to mankind.
    He came, he died,
    he rose.
    In this time of miracles,
    now, I need one.

    Now, I need one,
    in this a time of miracles.
    He rose.
    He came, he died.
    Like a promise to mankind,
    like a star,
    no, it’s brilliance.
    Words and phrases of cleverness you desire.
    What is it?
    In crowds of want,
    in places of confusion,
    my brain can’t go there.

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